rolling wet
like stones in a stream
faster as the long winter melt
infuses the source
orbs circling
friction building
contraposing elements
fluid and flame coil
up torso crawl
the blaze in need to grow
draws down the oxygen
collapsing lungs
fire, water, air
plaited in a carnal drive
lead the body in
concupiscent corruption
Luke Prater said:
concupiscent corruption >oh yes! Such an erotic piece yet you don’t cross the line into smut or porn. So much more poetic. Great visual too. Smokin
darkangelwrites said:
Thank you for the praise Mr. Prater.
Poets United said:
Thank you for joining Poets United. We look forward to visiting your blog and reading poetry. We also look forward to seeing you in our community.
Ink runs from the corners of my mouth
There is no happiness like mine.
I have been eating poetry.
~Mark Strand
darkangelwrites said:
No, thank you!
iwrit4me said:
perfect answer…
iwrit4me said:
and a superb piece of work…
darkangelwrites said:
Ha, ha, I said No (coma) thank you, not no thank you. And thanks.
The Poetry Palace said:
Greetings: Glad to discover your blog and your poetry talent is profound.
Poetry Rally week 51 is under the way, it would be a delight to have you in,
A free verse or a poem of your choice is welcome!
Bless your Wednesday!
Hope to see you share.
The Poetry Palace!
xoxox
your blog is deep, treasury, and beautiful.
darkangelwrites said:
Thank you for the invite!